Monday, October 24, 2011

Student Declaration of Independance

There are times in life when those without authority or any means of assuming authority must stand up for what they believe in. When it impacts the life they will lead, and the path to success in achieving their dreams, they should be permitted to make their opinions heard. In those occasions when an entire group of people agree upon changes that must be made, it should be in the best interest of those with authority over the aforementioned group to put their best effort in to reaching the prospect of the changes deemed necessary. We, the student body of Grosse Pointe South, take it upon ourselves to express the faults within the classrooms, the school, and the school district. Year after year, the curriculum within Michigan schools stays generally the same, with very few changes. Adults are often afraid of change, even if those changes that could be made would benefit the students who go through that set of courses. But we have decided that something must be done to fix that, and we must move out of the rut that the Grosse Pointe School district seems to be stuck in. Without consequences put forth and voiced by the student body, there is no motivation for teachers, staff, and administers to make those changes that promote the higher quality of learning.
 
They have limited the amount of teams and clubs students want to run and participate in.  Students have many interests and to form a team or club we need staff sponsors. Some teachers are not willing to donate their time after school limiting the amount extracurricular activities. The students that would like to have new teams or clubs are not able because of the lack of teacher effort. We are unsatisfied by the lack of teacher effort, and the lack of activities that students would like to have.
They have limited the amount of snow days because Grosse Pointe is a walking District. We do not take buses but that does not mean that students do not drive themselves to school. It is dangerous for anyone to drive on the snow covered and icy roads and is especially dangerous for new drivers. For the students that walk to and from school it is hard, because the sidewalks are not cleared or salted that often. Students and teachers slip on the icy sidewalks walking into school and injure themselves. The community would be safer if we could stay home on excessively snowy days.
They have placed fees on our athletics. They have required these fees multiple times a year. They have refused to let us play without these fees, when we cannot pay. They have insisted we pay these fees, even if our sport requires more money to pay for other things. They make us pay these fees still, if we fundraise, or gain separate donations.
 
They have increased the amount of homework for students at Grosse Pointe South. We are at school for eight hours and then have to spend four or more hours on homework every night. That is way too much time. We all have many extracurricular activities and do not have the time for piles of homework. Teachers do not understand that we have six other classes everyday that give us excessive amounts of homework. The students at Grosse Pointe South have to stay up into the late hours of the night, to finish their homework and that is not healthy.
They have given students many different essay formats. We as students should have one essay format that is consistent in every class. The lack of a constant essay format creates confusion while writing essays for the student body. Essays are a large part of our grade and if we use the wrong essay format our grade could suffer. The absence of one essay format for the school makes it unclear which essay format the student body should follow.
They have placed tests from multiple classes on one day. They have placed stress upon us, when we know that studying for multiple tests is nearly impossible. They have deprived us of time to study when studying requires material from several classes that are very time consuming. They have deprived us of a good grade when we could not study. They have given us a disadvantage against other students with different teachers, who would be given more time to study their class’s material.
They have increased the amount of non-academic requirements. Unnecessary classes like gym, health, and a computer class should not be required for students at Grosse Pointe South. We took those classes all through elementary and middle school. For a student that is not interested in those classes, they limit the amount of classes they can take that are relevant to their future career. The student body is not saying that those classes should be eliminated from Grosse Pointe South; they should just not be required.
They have restricted schools we are allowed to attend. Students in Kindergarten through 8th grade should be allowed to choose the school they want to go to.  Families move and we are forced to switch from their former schools. We should not have to be separated from our prior friendships formed at designated schools by you.  Students also have unique learning complications, and they should be able to go to schools that they can benefit most from.  Without being able to choose our schools the students may have to switch schools, or attend school unfit to help with their unique learning abilities.
They have reserved days to be only eight hours. They have not added hours to our day specifically for work, so that we could go home homework free. They have not added hours to our day specifically for sports, so that they do not run late into the day after school. They have not added time after school, to get more done, and provide for an extra day off. They have not placed a few extra hours on a school day for work, or sports, which would provide for an extra day off and a stress free environment at home.
They have not provided for a more flexible schedule. They have not allowed students to take one class off each week to provide for more study time or to pursue other activities. They have not allowed individual time in school to pursue activities outside of school, like sports. They have not given time in school for individual study that may result in higher testing scores. They have not even allowed giving up a class per week for individual study when an elective cannot be given up for a tutorial.       
Therefore, we, the student body, following the precedent set by our nation’s founding fathers, with the will of justice and right, severe the bonds and secede from the tyrannical and archaic establishment, and assert our right to teams without high and individual fees; the access to a system of testing where the tests are set at different dates, not piled on one day; the ability to graduate with the necessity of acquiring credits from classes that are not academic; the sanctity to days off from school when there’ enough school that other local districts are closed; the creation of a uniform way to write essays for every class in school; the freedom for a balanced and reasonable load of nightly homework; the freedom to step classes; the easing of how difficult it is to form clubs in school; the much increased level of education that would be received in a day with two extra hours, ne for sports and one a homework period; and the power to chose which school we want to go to, as long as it is in the district and you live in the district, for grades K-8. It is not logical or right, that we the student body, should struggle on while burdened by these tyrannical policies of the establishment, and if it is possible for these rights to be gained by sedition from the establishment, then we have the right, we have no choice but to secede from the oppression we are currently faced with.

Sunday, October 16, 2011

Crucible Epilogue Mercy Lewis

Mercy Lewis
On a ship to Boston sits Abigail Williams and Mercy Lewis.
Abigail: Whispering fervently, Two loaves of bread does not cost 2 pounds Mercy!
Mercy: Abby, I gave the man what he asked for, I-
Abigail: It is because of you we are almost out of money! We down to only 15 pounds now!
Mercy: Abby, I-
Abigail: No, Mercy! I will handle all of the money now, do you understand?
Mercy: Yes, I'm sorry-
Abigail: You are obviously too much of an imbecile to handle money anyway. You are lucky I got you out of that town full of heathens! How dare you treat me so rudely and spend the money when I was the one who saved you! You are lucky to be on this ship to Boston!
Mercy: You what?
Abigail: God came to me and bid me leave Salem when the Devil began running rampant there. I asked him if I could bring you with me to Boston so that we could be saved. He said to me that you were already destined for damnation and that there was no light in your soul. It was I who saw light in you yet, Mercy, it was I who saved you from damnation!
Mercy: Sobbing, Sorry Abby I-
Abigail: And I will handle the money now, correct?
Mercy: Yes.
Abigail: Good. Boston will be just heavenly, don’t you agree?
Mercy Lewis: Yes.
Abigail: When we get off this blasted boat we are going to make a name of ourselves, understand?
Mercy Lewis: How are we going to go about that?
Abigail: When we get off this boat we will use what is left of the money to get ourselves new dresses and garments so that we don’t look like we are dressed in potato sacs. As well as getting clean and bathed, because God knows you need to Mercy.
Others look at Mercy over Abigail’s remark. Mercy looks down at her stained dress and dirt covered hands and blushes.
Abigail: Speaking to a man who looked at Mercy, You there, what might your name be?
Adam: Adam Newell, miss.
Adam is a well dressed man with handsome features. He sits next to others on the boat, but seems to be by himself.
 Abigail: smiling angelically, Now, dear Adam, do you hail from Boston?
Adam: he smiles back, I do, miss.
Abigail: You are quite handsome Mr. Newell, are you returning to Boston with your wife I presume? She looks around innocently.

Adam: He laughs, No, I’m afraid I am not married.
Abigail: Laughing, I presumed wrong!
Adam: And your name, miss? What brings you and your friend to Boston?
Abigail: Abigail, Abigail Williams, sir. My friend, Mercy, and I hail from Salem. We came to Boston to… meet my cousin, and stay with her for a while.
Mercy: Whispering to Abby, Why do you lie?
Abigail: To Mercy, Shush. Now back to Adam, As such a handsome and intelligent man you must be Adam, do you know where we would be able to purchase dresses when we arrive in Boston?
Adam: Of course! If you just follow me when we reach or destination I will show you the best place to purchase fine clothing.
Abigail: Why aren’t you just delightful!
Just as Abigail finishes her conversation they arrive in Boston. Abigail stands and wraps her arm through Adams as he motions her out of the ship. Mercy follows along silently, wondering why Abigail failed to mention the happenings of Salem, of God, and why she had lied about their intentions in Boston.
Later when arriving in Boston, Adam led them to a well known tailor.
Abigail: Isn’t this dress just lovely!
Abby spins in a pretty pink dress with multiple petticoats. The neckline is considerably low. She stands on a platform with the tailor at her feet. Adam stands by smiling, and Mercy sits close by. Abigail spent less than a pound when buying Mercy’s ugly green dress, while this pretty pink one was her fourth, nearly ringing up 13 pounds now.  
Mercy: Don’t you think the neckline on this dress is a bit low Abby?
Abigail: Shush Mercy. It is not remarkably low, I do believe actually it could go a tad lower.
The Tailor: This last dress will be nearly 4 pounds.
Abigail: Perfect! Mercy, dear, pay the woman.
Mercy: I cannot.
Abigail: Yes you can, the money is in my bag.
Mercy: Whispering, We do not have enough Abby, you have overspent our money. And why did you lie about Salem when we were on the ship? God would not want us indulging in these dresses like you have, what with these unsightly necklines.
Abigail:           -Shush! I have not! You spent-! When noticing the stare of the other two in the room, Ahem. Adam, dear?
Adam: Yes?
She walks to him, and places a hand on his cheek.
Abigail: Adam dear, you handsome man, I am quite fond of you-
Adam: Blushing, You are I-?
Abigail:           -Shush. Yes, of course dear Adam. But, my friend and I have come to a dilemma, you see.
Adam: Confused, Yes?
Abigail: And we have run out of mon-
Mercy:             -NO!
Abigail: Mercy!
Mercy: No, no, no, no, no! You will not push this poor man around anymore! Or me for that matter!
Abigail: Embarrassed, Mercy-
Mercy:             - No! God would not want you doing this! You are a whore Abby! I didn’t believe those rumors back in Salem and now I do! You never brought me here to save me! You brought me to Boston so that I could be your servant! I will not be your servant anymore!
Abigail runs up and shoves Mercy.
Abigail: Shut your mouth!
Mercy: I will not! I see what you are Abby! You killed innocent people in Salem, and now you treat me like trash! I will not let you take advantage of poor Mr. Adam! There is no light of god in you Abby! You are nothing but a whore!
Abigail: Shut it!
Adam: What is the meaning of this?!
Mercy: She wants nothing but your money Mr. Newell! She does not love you!
Abigail: She lies, Adam!
Mercy: I do not lie! She had an affair with a man back in Salem, and after he denied her what she wanted she tried to get his wife killed and killed him in the process! You are nothing but a whore with a whore’s greed! You don’t have to believe me, but I will not stand for her lies any longer! She takes any advantage you give her!
Adam: Disgusted, You killed a man?!
Mercy: Abby, I should have denied your lies long ago, when Mary did so, and maybe those innocent people would still be alive. Your whore’s vengeance drive you and I will stand it no longer! I will no longer be tainted by you! I will follow gods true light.
Adam: You disgust me! Adam storms out of the shop.
Abigail: Defeated, sobbing, Mercy!
Mercy: The one who is truly damned is you Abby. I am going to leave you now and never come back. You will always be a whore, a whore who takes advantage of everything and everyone. I hope to god that his light will reach you before you live the rest of your life this way.
Mercy leaves the shop never to be seen again.

Sunday, October 9, 2011

Crucible Essay

Grace Martinez
The Crucible
            The Crucible, written by Arthur Miller, depicts a fictional view on the Salem Witch Trials through the eyes of the villagers who endured them. The Witch Trials were driven by power, religion, and reputation in the colonial society of Salem. Shifts in power, driven by their strong religious beliefs, were responsible for the beginning of the Witch Trials. The power in Salem shifted from those with true authority, to one person who was easily able to lead those who had lost their common sense. The villager’s strong religious beliefs kept their certainty in witches and witch hunts from dying out, while also at the expense of innocent lives. All that was needed to save the life of one who was charged was a confession and a promise to return to god. And while most who were innocent and charged did so, some decided not to blacken their name because they knew a confession to witchcraft would be a lie. While under the influence of greed over power, religion, and reputation those most responsible for the Salem Witch Trials were Abigail Williams, John Proctor, and Mary Warren.
            With the loss of true authority in Salem came the loss of common sense, Abigail Williams used this as an advantage to gain power in Salem’s society. Using threats of violence or the threats of the wrath of god, Abigail was able to gain all power in Salem. Abigail directly influenced the Witch Trials by being the main accuser of witches. Her main motivation behind her accusations was the revenge on Elizabeth Proctor, who had kicked her out after suspecting her and John’s affair. After being caught actually performing witchcraft with Tituba and Ruth Putnum, Abigail immediately jumps into action, rallying all of her friends to support her in what would be a major shift in power. By initially accusing the lowest class citizens in society Abby was able to gain power, and trust, from the adults around her. Her gain in power is what was leading up to her accusation of Elizabeth Proctor, who she accused so that she could be with John after they executed her. Abigail cut herself, performed elaborate attacks from spirits, and stuck needles in herself to continue the ruse that was the reality of witches in Salem. “…stuck two inches in the flesh of her belly, he draw a needle out. And demandin’ of her how she come to be so stabbed, she-to proctor now-testify it were your wife’s familiar spirit pushed it in” (Miller 74).  Abigail was directly responsible for the Salem Witch Trials by being the main accuser, going to great lengths to pretend that she was being attacked by spirits, and by hurting herself all so that she could be with John Proctor.
            While Abigail initiated the Witch Trials to gain the love of John, John Proctor led Abigail on to believe that there was hope for their relationship. “Abby, I may think of you softly from time to time” (Miller 23). Abigail’s hope was a main factor to the continuance of the Witch Trials. John was the entire reason Abigail began her accusations in the first place. Their affair led her to believe that she loved him, and although he didn’t, she continued to accuse people to get him back. While innocent people were being accused, and even killed, John never once lifted a finger. Not until after his wife was accused by Abigail did he decide to confess their affair to save his wife.  John knows that the only way to diminish Abigail’s power is by blackening her name and ruining her reputation, but by doing so he knows that he will blacken his name as well. “I have made a bell of my honor! I have rung the doom of my good name” (Miller 110).  John finds himself at odds with an inner conflict over losing his reputation or his wife. He finally confesses his adultery only to have his wife protect his good name. John Proctor was responsible for the Salem Witch Trials through his affair with Abigail and leading her on until the loss of innocent lives and the accusation of his wife drove him into action against it.

            Mary Warren is the last of the main characters that were responsible for the Salem Witch Trials. From the very beginning Mary had been one of Abigail’s followers who bid everything that she told them to do so that they could charge innocent people. By being considerably unintelligent it must have been easy for Mary to be pulled into Abigail’s influence. She helped Abigail accuse those who she knew were innocent, and performed elaborate ruses to stabilize the belief in the affect of witches. And after Proctor made her testify against Abigail, she fell through, because she was then being tormented by those who she thought was her friends. “PROCTOR,… you will tell the court what you know. … MARY WARREN, I cannot, they’ll turn on me” (Miller 80). Mary’s lack of leadership and willingness to stand up for what was right, made her responsible for the death of innocent people. After jumping back to Abigail’s side she immediately blamed John of witchcraft, to get back on the good side of her leader. Because Mary was unintelligent, a follower, and someone who couldn’t stand up for herself she became responsible for the Salem Witch Trials by falling through when she had a chance to stop them.
            The Witch Trials in The Crucible were driven by power, religion, and reputation in Salem. The power in Salem shifted from those with true authority, to Abigail Williams who was easily able to lead Mary Warren and others like her who had lost their common sense. The community’s strong religious beliefs and Abigail’s ruses that backed up their beliefs kept their certainty in witches and witch hunts from dying out.  Many innocent people lost their lives because of Abigail and Mary as well as John Proctor, who, if had acted sooner, may have prevented the Witch Trials from going as far as they did. While under the influence of greed over power, religion, and reputation those most responsible for the Salem Witch Trials were Abigail Williams, John Proctor, and Mary Warren.

Monday, October 3, 2011

Crucible Post 2

 “At one point, Proctor tells Hale that he believes in witches even though he does not. Would you be willing to lie and tell people you believe in something you do not in order to protect yourself? Why or why not?”

With the situation that John Proctor is in, it is no wonder why he would not deny the existence of witches. Had he had said that he didn't believe in their existence he would have been persecuted and probably killed for his beliefs. If I was in a situation where my beliefs would determine whether I lived or died, I would most likely lie to stay alive. I would live for my family, and for myself. I am not so self sacrificing that I would give my life to protect my beliefs, although I know that around the world many people do. John knew what consequences would come if he denied witches, which also meant that he denied the bible. So, it was a huge surprise when Elizabeth, who also knew the consequences, absolutely denied the existence of witches.Elizabeth is an extremely brave woman, who was risking her life to protect what she believed. And although I don't know if I would be able to be as brave as Elizabeth in her situation, I do know that I would most likely lie to protect myself in her situation.